2015年12月大学英语四级写作解析

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很多同学在看到这次四级题目的时候都是傻眼了，居然不是考图画，反过来考了六级的大纲样题的形式，如果有上过强化班的同学应该都知道我们是讲过这种写作的思路和模板的，类似的题型四级不是第一次考了2011年12月就考过了，当时的题目是这样的： For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times.” You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 如果有认真上课的同学应该发现这是我们强化课PPT的183页哦，当时就以这篇文章为写作素材，讲了谚语型的写作思路哟！现如果大家有认真复习了我们强化课还精讲精炼班说过的写作模板，这次写作就不是太难啦。

（题目一）For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of being participants rather than mere onlookers in life. You should write at least 120 words, no more than 180 words.

As the saying goes, “Never go out there to see what happens, go out there to make something happen.” In other words, we had better take part in what happens instead of on-looking it without doing anything. Simple as the remark may sound, it reminds us of the fact that being participants is of great significance.

Actually, a number of factors can account for my view, but the following might be the critical ones. First and foremost, being participants means being creative, which helps us nurture creativity and imagination. In addition, it also broadens our horizons. Last but not least, it is highly beneficial for us if we want to be successful. Take Mayun for example, the well-known millionaire in China. He made a great difference in the Internet world by participating actively and created a new business model for the whole country.

Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably draw the conclusion that the importance of being participants should be paid attention to. Only in this way can we succeed in our study, life and work.

（题目二）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of lifelong learning. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

As the saying goes, “Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission.” In other words, we had better form the habit of lifetime learning. Simple as the remark may sound, it reminds us of the fact that learning for a whole life is of great significance.

Actually, a number of factors can account for my view, but the following might be the critical ones. First and foremost, learning is one of the everyday experiences, which helps us nurture creativity and imagination. In addition, it also broadens our horizons. Last but not least, it is highly beneficial for us if we want to be successful.

Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably draw the conclusion that the importance of lifetime study should be paid attention to. Only in this way can we succeed in our study, life and work.

（题目三）Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Listening is more important than talking.” You can cite examples to illustrate the importance of listening. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

As the saying goes, “Listening is more important than talking.” In other words, we had better form the habit of listening to others’ voices instead of talking too much. Simple as the remark may sound, it reminds us of the fact that listening is of great significance.

Actually, a number of factors can account for my view, but the following might be the critical ones. First and foremost, listening is one of the most significant communicating skills, which helps us understand others better. In addition, it also broadens our horizons. Last but not least, it is highly beneficial for us if we want to make more friends in our life.

Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably draw the conclusion that the importance of listening should be paid attention to. Only in this way can we succeed in our study, life and work.