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【托福写作】作文举例说明小tip+12.19名人经典素材库

2017-12-19 11:13

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  很多同学写托福作文的时候论证段说理性句子较多,而往往忽略了例子的应用。虽然我们常说要以理服人,但是在说理的同时加上生动的例子用事实说话将会起到更好的效果~那么有哪些举例子的方法呢?


No.1 万能事例

  自己背一些经典素材,充实自己的素材库。

  比如经常用到的名人(孔子、爱迪生、牛顿……)

  经常出现在较抽象题目的文章中的理论(马斯洛需求层次理论)

  经常在科技文或者新旧对比类文中出现的物品(微波炉、汽车、转基因食品……这些可以提前wiki一下,精简成适合写作的材料)

No.2 扯淡法

  没有名人例子举的时候,自己对应编一个例子现身说法,把猪脚换成自己,或者举自己的亲戚邻居什么的也可以。

  如果扯不出来了,我们可以从正反面两个方面来说——对比加强,以充实我们的文章。

  比如说:我的父母从来不强加自己的意愿在我身上,我选择了自己喜欢的职业;而我的邻居Mike则被迫放弃了自己梦想的职业而继承了父亲的职业,结果他现在虽有高的收入,但是郁郁寡欢,后悔当初没有追寻自己的意愿。所以,我认为……

No.3 数例法

  顾名思义,可以记住一些常见问题的数据量,用数据说话往往简单粗暴但是强力有效。


  以下就由小新放送一些名人经典例子的英文段子,希望能帮到大家~在未来小新也会不定期推出相关素材,敬请期待哦\(^o^)/~

1.Bill Gates 

  When Bill Gates made his decision to drop out from Harvard, he did not care too much of the result. Gates entered Harvard in 1973, and dropped out two years later when he and Allen started the engine of Microsoft. Many people did not understand why Gates gave up such a good opportunity to study in the world’s No.1 University. However, with size comes power, Microsoft dominates the PC market with its operating systems, such as MS-DOS and Windows. Now, Microsoft becomes the biggest software company in the world and Bill Gates becomes the richest man in the world.

2.Thomas Edison 

  We can learn from the experience of the great inventor Thomas Alva Edison that sometimes a series of apparent failures is really a precursor to success. The voluminous personal papers of Edison reveal that his inventions typically did not spring to life in a flash of inspiration but evolved slowly from previous works.

3.Mother Teresa  

  Mother Teresa, winner of the Nobel Peace Prize, dedicated the majority of her life to helping the poorest of the poor in India, thus gaining her the name "Saint of the Gutters." The devotion towards the poor won her respect throughout the world and the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979. She founded an order of nuns called the Missionaries of Charity in Calcutta, India dedicated to serving the poor. Almost 50 years later, the Missionaries of Charity have grown from 12 sisters in India to over 3,000 in 517 missions throughout 100 countries worldwide.

4.Diana Spencer  

  Lady Diana Spencer, Princess of Whales, is remembered and respected by people all over the world more for her beauty, kindness, humanity and charitable activities than for her technical skills.

5.Nelson Mandela

  Mandela, the South African black political leader and former president, was awarded 1993 Nobel Peace Prize for his efforts to antiracism and antiapartheid. Nelson Mandela is one of the great moral and political leaders of our time: an international hero whose lifelong dedication to the fight against racial oppression in South Africa won him the Nobel Peace Prize and the presidency of his country. Since his triumphant release in 1990 from more than a quarter-century of imprisonment, Mandela has been at the centre of the most compelling and inspiring political drama in the world. As president of the African National Congress and head of South Africa's antiapartheid movement, he was instrumental in moving the nation toward multiracial government and majority rule. He is revered everywhere as a vital force in the fight for human rights and racial equality.

6.Beethoven  

  Beethoven, the German Composer, began to lose his hearing in 1801 and was entirely deaf by 1819. However, this obstacle could not keep him from becoming one of the most famous and prolific composers in art history. His music, including 9 symphonies, 5 piano concertos, several senates and so on, formes a transition from classical to romantic composition.

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